Here's a refined version with a smoother flow and a bit more impact: --- Times are changing, and the Grimoas are fading into obscurity, their presence no longer essential in daily life. During his Coming-of-Age ceremony, young Eil suddenly finds his town under siege, engulfed in flames by a powerful demon. Amid the chaos, he forms a pact with Nogard, the Air Grimoa, in a desperate attempt to save everyone. Determined to hunt down the creature responsible for the destruction, Eil and Nogard embark on a journey to find other Grimoas and put an end to the demon's reign of terror once and for all.